Phenomenal women
Pretty women wonder where my secret lies.
I'm not cute or built to suit a fashion model's size
But when I start to tell them,
They think I'm telling lies.
It's in the reach of my arms
The span of my hips,
The stride of my step,
The curl of my lips.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
I walk into a room
Just as cool as you please,
And to a man,
The fellows stand or
Fall down on their knees.
Then they swarm around me,
A hive of honey bees.
I say,
It's the fire in my eyes,
And the flash of my teeth,
The swing in my waist,
And the joy in my feet.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
Men themselves have wondered
What they see in me.
They try so much
But they can't touch
My inner mystery.
When I try to show them
They say they still can't see.
I say,
It's in the arch of my back,
The sun of my smile,
The ride of my breasts,
The grace of my style.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
Now you understand
Just why my head's not bowed.
I don't shout or jump about
Or have to talk real loud.
When you see me passing
It ought to make you proud.
I say,
It's in the click of my heels,
The bend of my hair,
the palm of my hand,
The need of my care,
'Cause I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
- Maya Angelou
Analysis
The poem “Phenomenal Woman” is a classic piece of Black Feminist Poetry by
Maya Angelou. It explains the different details about a woman that makes her
phenomenal. Maya shows us that this woman feels great about herself regardless
of what others think. Throughout the poem she tells us that nobody seems to
understand what it is that makes her attractive because she is not physically
beautiful by society’s standards. So what makes this woman so appealing? The
woman in this poem is appealing to others because of her inner beauty and how
she feels about herself. It is not about how she looks on the outside nor is it
about what makes her attractive to the opposite sex. Even other women notice
there is a something about this woman but they don’t understand why because she
does not portray what is considered beautiful just by looking at her. The poem
opens up by saying “Pretty women wonder where my secret lies. I’m not cute or
built to suit a fashion model’s size” She lets us know from the beginning that
it is not her physical features that make her attractive. “Men themselves have
wondered what they see in me. They try so much but they can’t touch my inner
mystery.” This shows that it is not an actual feature that makes her attractive
to men it is something that cannot be seen or touched, it is something that
comes from within. “I walk into a room just as cool as you please, and to a man
the fellows stand or fall on their knees. Then they swarm around me, a hive of
honey bees.“ This part of the poem shows that men do find her attractive and
are drawn to her like bees to honey. So, to be
the phenomenal woman is not only about physical appearance but also the real
women must concern to inner beauty to change people stereotype. Because inner
beauty is more powerful to make women regard as phenomenal woman.